Your Two Sentences

Hey... I think it's pretty cool that you're kinda sorta making a good thing out of a bad experience. Sounds like a stressful bullshit kind of evening, but you boiled it all down to some mighty fine writing...

You should write poetry... you really should. Take a spiral notebook out on the surfboard with you some time (or your laptop...) and dump your thoughts and feelings and crank out some of those cool descriptions. You have a knack for word choices and paint pictures (and feelings). You really do.

And once again, I admire your balls-out honesty. That's something you've got checked off with permanent black ink on your "learn how to write" checklist. Fer sure.

And fuck all those people picking on Sting. I saw him performing at some awards ceremony recently (with Kanye West looking like an idiot as he "rapped" along side...). Sting wore a sleeveless t-shirt... tight cut muscle arms and abs of steel. Shit, I'd do him if he asked me.